Sunday, December 7, 2014

From Stones to Drones

Tools for combat or war have been among the first technological advancements in most, if not all civilizations. The evolution of tanks, grenades, and even automatic weapons have been fraught with controversy. Drones are the next step in our collective ongoing tale of war. Given the violent use of these devices and the advantes/drawbacks inherent in their uses, there's been much controversy behind the use of drones both abroad and within our borders. There are many factors to keep in mind when discussing warfare, and among the most important is the safety of the soldiers engaging. With this in mind, I believe military use of drones overseas is justifiable given certain parameters. Situations where a target is inaccessible by troops, or heavily entrenched by enemy combatants are the ideal. Surveillance using drones is a touchier subject, and should be heavily restricted to hostile areas, so as to not invade the privacy and sovereignty of other nations.

Some suggest that drones may be as dangerous to civilians as to enemy troops. This may be true, but to speak of this without referencing the combat that drones may replace is to speak of it in a vaccuum. In July 2012 it was reported that, for the first time, drone strikes had a civilian casualty that was "at or close to zero", following a downward trend of them. Detractors further note that drone strikes may force opposing nations to develop them as well to keep up, technologically. This may be true, but development has always been a factor in warfare. Countries have always competed for more advanced weaponry, whether at open war or during times of peace. Guns led to the development of automatic guns, artilery evolved into tanks, etc. since the advent of war. Halting progress in the hope that your opponent will see that complacency and counter with their own is naive.


Drone strikes hurting innocent civilians and children are always tragedies, and the most care should be done to avoid such as often as possible. Use of excessive force is inexcusable at large or at home, and when lives are loss it should be especially penalized. But a hypothetical future wherein drones are out of control shouldn't prevent their use to avoid the realities of war. Civilians are not and should not be treated as soldiers, but when the options are between allowing soldiers to overrun an area to search for targets or allowing a drone to fly overhead to discern locations, I believe that the present safety should trump potential situations that could come about because of the technlogy.


http://www.cnn.com/2012/07/13/opinion/bergen-civilian-casualties/
http://www.theguardian.com/world/2012/aug/02/drone-strikes-thorny-legal-questions
http://theweek.com/article/index/211387/should-police-use-unmanned-aerial-drones
http://theweek.com/article/index/223047/obamas-defense-cuts-can-drones-really-keep-us-safe
http://theweek.com/article/index/235269/no-debate-about-drones

1 comment:

  1. Frankie,

    Good post. Excellent writing. Your introduction does a spectacular job of outlining the controversies surrounding this deadly, yet useful technology. It is provocative, well written, and educational.

    You have the 3 paragraph format down, and your argument is good, but the final two paragraphs need more facts. How many people have been killed? What countries are experiencing drone warfare? Which other countries will develop drones of their own first?

    These are the facts that are needed to hold up your argument. You have the ability to craft a clear, firm argument, but you have to prove that you are right by presenting more facts. Always try to have at least 3 in each paragraph. Then, nobody can doubt you - as your writing is very professional and persuasive.

    Take a second look and see where you can fill in the gaps with facts.


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