Big oil industry would have climatologists downplay coal and oilburning emissions contribution to the change. The situation has been studied for over 20 years now, and science cannot state definitively that carbon emissions are the cause of the change, due to the nature of scientific study & the scope of the atmospheric damage done, and thus independent groups use that technicality to claim other possibilities are just as valid despite not having the same hard evidence behind it. Party wise, typically Republicans, being on the side of "big business" are more opposed to climate change & regulation of carbon emissions.
Personally, I find the debate silly. Opponents are grasping at straws, hoping for any new information that could absolve the coal and oil industries of fault & allow them to maintain their current states, lining their wallets and their candidates political funds. Some groups even go so far as to suggest school rubrics emphasizing climate change's controversy, undermining the information in favor of sowing further confusion to slow down the changes in policy that would diminish their profits, fund events devoted to science arguing against it, and finances many of the major scientists opposing.(Source). It just comes across as the last desperate attempts of a group to establish legitimacy in the face of overwhelming evidence against them.
Frankie,
ReplyDeleteGood post. This is a good first draft that needs the following components:
1. A clear thesis statement at the end of your first paragraph. Come down with something strong and definitive - that sets the tone for the rest of the post/content. Here, your intro needs that definitive closing sentence. It'd fit right in.
2. In your second paragraph - ad more research. Find some quotes from politicians who have made strong cases against climate change initiatives. Who are these leaders? Instead of just stating Republicans, let's find some specific representatives to use as examples. Also, what is their reason for this denial? Jobs? Economy? Give their motive, too.
3. Your third paragraph is good, it's just missing supportive facts. Find 3 statistics that support your claim here. Give some more credibility to this paragraph.
Overall - good formatting and writing - you just need more meat. More facts.
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