(Not a reputable firearms dealer!)
Many among the far Right seem to have the idea that the solution to this problem is MORE guns. They contend that if citizens present at the time of any of the myriad tragedies caused by gun violence had access to firearms, they could've prevented more carnage- to which it must be asked, how much more? Must elementary school security guards be armed? With weapons enough to take down a man with fully automatic handguns and rifles? Firearms are readily accessible in today's society, and yet the people in these situations weren't carrying the weapons that COULD have protected them, but definitely actually DID harm them. These men and women believe guns to be the solution to any security concern- even when guns ARE the security concern. Stymying progress in favor of their ill defined (by design) right to bear some kind of weapon, left undescribed, and indeed, undescribable, the founding fathers having OBVIOUSLY been aware of advancing technology. The 2nd Amendment doesn't specifically preclude weapons that these men and women are desperate to protect, because these weapons did not exist at the time of it's writing.
(http://www.justplainpolitics.com/showthread.php?47848-NRA-s-2nd-Amendment)
I believe that gun rights are currently too lax on citizens. US citizens should be allowed to defend their homes and persons, but carrying weapons, some concealed, is more of a threat than it is security. Firearms should be restricted to the home or to those with the proper training to use them, they're far too dangerous to be used in public for anyone to have. Weaponry such as this should be relegated to those who would use it for it's original intent- trained defense. Allowing laymen to have it is a dangerous tempatation that has proven too much for the citizenry.
http://www.bradycampaign.org/xshare/Facts/Gun_Death_and_Injury_Stat_Sheet_3-Year_Average_FINAL.pdf
http://usnews.nbcnews.com/_news/2013/01/16/16547690-just-the-facts-gun-violence-in-america?lite
Frankie,
ReplyDeleteGood post. Your introduction is a slam dunk! It's filled with lots of researched facts and it clearly has a focal point and thesis. It's near perfect, as it grabs the reader and makes guns an important issue. Your tone provides an urgency that is gripping.
But then your last two paragraphs continue, gradually get smaller, and have hardly any researched facts. Where did they go? Try to spread your facts out all throughout your post, especially in your analysis, when you're finally trying to prove to readers that your thesis is correct (or the best of the best).
Without these facts to back you up, your post looses it's weight and credibility. It falls into all opinion, which is less credible. Stuff each paragraph with at least 2-3 facts, and your posts will be unstoppable.
You're getting closer. Find the balance of facts throughout your post, and you'll be nearing perfection.
GR: 85